In the jungle
It was 45:30. The sun was shining, the weather was good. Only the fog controlled my sight.
I felt myself too weak, so I went for the Blue buff. On my way, some
wolfs looked my back, I had to kill them all. It meant for me some more
gold. But it was just the beginning. From one of the brushes, something
came. I didn't recognize, what was that, but I thought it will be the
end. My mana was just on the half, my HP is on low after the teamfight
before a minute, and it was the enemys jungle... But I took another
breath, and went in. "Anything is inside, I can kill him!" - I thought.
The way was longer than ever, the giant was very near. And then I looked
inside : Nothing. There was nothing. Some of the brush were cut off,
and little purple balls were made light in it. Then they gone. It seemed
like I'm just imagining these things. But when I looked into the golems
face, and tried to look behind it, I saw the same purple color, and the
same light. And nobody around me. The golems health was lower than me
then. "After that, I'm gonna go home! It's getting dangerous!" - I said.
But at that time, three blades came from nothing. The golem died. And
the buff is gone. I started to run. And then I saw Talon. Full HP, full
of mana and he had every item. I fought with him, but his build was
without too much max HP. I shot every skill I had, then ulted him, and
the last auto attack killed him.
-SHUTDOWN!-
I had 10 HP after the noxian diplomacy.
But I felt something is wrong. I started to recall immediately, in the
think of "I made it well, I'm gonna be the hero of the team".
Only one second remained. The recall was almost done. Then I got my
answer, that what was the purple color before: The nothing in the brush
wasn't nothing. It was Void. The purple color everywhere was not just
imagining: It was the color of the Void! And then I looked to my legs,
and I wasn't see the blue ring of the blue buff. And it has only one
reason: I wasn't alone. And I even know, who is that one. One of the
people, who can kill you, without he must go before you. And it has got a
purple knife on his right hand... (silenced)
-Lux has been slain! Kassadin has scored an ace-
Tehát vélemények?
#10: Értem. Hát, semmi sem tökéletes, főleg nem egy első alkotás, viszont tekintve hogy nincs még itt negatív kritika, azt hiszem ezt is megfogadom. Ellenben van-e kimondottan ötleted, hogy mit kéne csiszolni rajta? (Elnézést kérek, csak a saját szememmel (talán némi elfogultságból is) nem látom igazán a hibákat.)
(és egy komment szerkesztő gombot legalább az adott blog tulajának lehetne adni.)
Ha nem vagy még tag, regisztrálj! 2 perc az egész.